I WOULD'VE DONE SO MUCH FOR HIM,

BUT HE DIDN'T EVEN CARE.

HE MEANT THE WORLD TO ME

BUT WAS NEVER THERE

I GAVE SO MUCH TO MAKE IT WORK

BUT HE DIDNT EVEN TRY.

NOW MY WORLD IS FALLING APART

SINCE HE SAID GOODBYE.

HE HAS HIS EYE ON SOMEONE NEW,

HE TREATS HER VERY GOOD.

I CAN'T HELP BUT WONDER

WHY HE DIDN'T TREAT ME LIKE HE SHOULD.

 NOW I HAVE A BROKEN HEART,

BUT THAT IN TIME MIGHT HEAL.

I JUST WISH I HAD ANOTHER CHANCE

JUST TO TELL HIM HOW I FEEL!!!!

Comment By: Blake Hightdudis on May 1, 2006 02:21:11 PM	Report
Excellent sad piece, Just maybe that was meant to be, opening the path to the one who is really right. Reply To This Comment
Comment By: Adri on April 26, 2006 09:43:22 AM	Report
Lubs, I know exactly how you feel. My sad story played out more or less the same as yours, only deference, he left me for a man. That’s bad. Great poem, so much feeling, so much regret. (It does gets better after a wile) Adri Reply To This Comment
Comment By: lionheart on April 23, 2006 07:03:18 AM	Report
Sensual Sorceress is right, love is like war... with battles fought within and without. It is as if we must expect it. lionheart Reply To This Comment
Comment By: David Wood on April 17, 2006 10:14:23 AM	Report
Lubs, my dear friend you have captured the readers heart with this sad poem. Written very well my friend. Best Wishes. ~David Reply To This Comment
Comment By: Sensual Sorceress on April 1, 2006 05:46:07 AM	Report
Lubbs, Love is like war, hell on the people in it! Nice expression. blessings, Ms.S Reply To This Comment
Comment By: joe mcninney on March 18, 2006 11:11:01 AM	Report
Sorry Lubs for your pain, sad but nicely written, Joe Reply To This Comment
Comment By: Little Fox on March 16, 2006 02:26:29 PM	Report
I think most of us have felt the wrath and scorn of love...so happy, so sad... Your pen flows beautifully, Lubs, and this poem expresses very well... Best wishes, Pamela Reply To This Comment
Comment By: Nostrodamus on March 16, 2006 01:53:39 PM	Report
If we give the wrong person all of our money they take it without comment or thanks. If we give the right person one dime then they treasure it, keep it shiny and close to them each day. You will find the one person to give your treasure too. Reply To This Comment
Comment By: James.A on March 7, 2006 01:30:46 PM	Report
nice and sad write Reply To This Comment
Comment By: James.A on March 7, 2006 01:29:36 PM	Report
nice and sad write Reply To This Comment
Comment By: Michael Meddings on March 6, 2006 05:41:08 AM	Report
Lubiana a beautiful poem young lady with your heart in full cry but as someone who has known the pain of love trust me it never hurts forever a good poem well done michael Reply To This Comment
Comment By: shelby on March 5, 2006 10:46:27 AM	Report
i think my boyfriend feels the same way about me but i didnt treat him bad he treated me bad so oh well. good job. :::Shelby::: Please comment back! Please read my COPYCAT poem and help me delete a fake on this site! Reply To This Comment
Comment By: CARRIE on March 5, 2006 10:21:32 AM	Report
Awesome write. Your worth more than that,he must be blind. He'll realize what he lost but then it will be too late. -*CARRIE* Reply To This Comment
Comment By: Tanya on March 5, 2006 08:59:35 AM	Report
If he left you for someone else, then he was never worth your time anyway! I think this is a GREAT poem. I'm sorry this happened to you! Tanya~ Reply To This Comment
Comment By: INDIA on March 5, 2006 08:16:52 AM	Report
LUBS, THIS IS SO VERY SAD PRETTY LADY..SOME TIMES WE GIVE SO MUCH AND YET IT SEEMS NEVER ENOUGH..MY HEART BREAKS READING THIS.. READ APHRODITE'S ~*~KISS.. IT WILL PUT YOU IN A GOOD MOOD. HUGS FROM TEXAS ~ SHE Reply To This Comment